Saved My Life

by Nicole   Nov 18, 2005


Its not the first time it happened,
Just the first time someone found out,
We sat and talked for hours,
Trying to decide what life is all about.

I told you I wasnt happy,
And for a while now Ive been sad,
I told you I never once thought,
Things would get this bad.

You said you wanted to see me,
Asked me to show up at school the next day,
You wanted me to promise,
I honestly didnt know what to say.

I wanted you to see me,
But I didnt want to lie,
I couldnt promise you anything,
But I told you I would try.

You said sorry you didnt notice,
And that I was really scaring you,
You said you were going to help me,
Do what you could to help get me though.

Well get through this together,
Together well deal with this strife,
I dont think you realize,
Tonight you saved my life.

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please comment and let me know what you think. thanks.

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  • 19 years ago

    by LOOPE

    I love your poem, I love the way you put those thoughts together. That reminds me of something similar that happened to me. People don't realize that little things like talks, advice, and just showing that you care, and lending a shoulder could make a big difference in peoples life, atleast for me it did. Excellent writing, keep it up and stay strong.

  • 19 years ago

    by EmylnThorn

    You have great poetry and you should keep up with your craft. I can't wait to see what else you come up with. Thanks for the comment on my poems, and feel free to check out the rest.