I really liked this poem. Great Job!!

OMG THIS WAS SO GOOD! so much description...and the rhyme scheme was gr8. 5/5 4 sure! keep up the gr8 work!
~*Who Cares?*~

Great rhyme sceme and flow and so much felling.

Whoa!!! Very good!! Nice flow!

This is great. Excellent job. Keep it up.

Tiffany.xox.

Brilliant write. loved it. well done and keep it up!

Wow. very good. dark, but good. it is surprising how often dark poems are excellent...