Yeah...it happens...I hope u r alright...cause I am...and I hope u won't hev 2 use the knife anymore...if u take me as a friend...luv ya hun...be strong...Jane

Great Poem Mam

Awesome poem huni...really good..its so true..
keep ur chin up babe...
xoxoxox

Great poem, its so true. I love it
keep it up
tara xxx

Great poem very well written

I thought that your peom was amazingly awsome! i really wanna read other poems made by you :)

Aww tht was sad. Great Poem.. I liked how it was short but to the point.
Amyxx

Ohh wow I am so speechless hunni, this poem is amazing, so well written and it touched my heart!!! I loved the ending, so perfect and true....Brought tears to my eyes! I love your poems sweety, they are so full of meaning...

*Much Love Sabrina*

Very good.. i can relate..*5/5

Wow this was amazing! it was just brilliant hun! xox

Amazing poem
deep & full of pain...
i'm addicted to the knife too
5/5
love
amy
Ps-check out murder or suicide

One of the best poems I have ever heard awesome job you got the point out so well ...

I love this poem!

Wow...absolutely amazing!!! i mean, wow... keep it up!
-xXx-

Amazing! Dang I love your work! Like I tell everyone (Cause its like the only advise I can give) more commas and Periods! For this poem it would just make it look nicer and of course remind the reader to pause at spots and just tell them that a sentence has ended. But it truly does make it look nicer. Other then that I cant say it needs any work at all cause its amazing! Great Job!!!

~Megan~

Yeah, i did the same thing only i lived. but keep writing this is really good. 5/5

That was completely amazing! It is so true! Wow you really put it into perspective and the wording was awesome! Awesome job! I give it way more than a 5 for sure!

Brooke

So0o0o sad, but a really good.

Poem.*

Damn nice poem ....was she yo friend?? ,,,,,,,check my poem out its about my 1st luv !