Wow amazing poem
the ending was fabulous
it is wonderful that you are writing about regreting suicide, which is different from many of your other poems

the last stanz was my favorite

I love this for it shows why alot of us do it and when we come so close that we get scared but some day we will end up as her a cold body lieing dead upon the floor until that day come to me ,.

love heather

Another increadable pieve of work..it was quick and to the point..well done

Very good! sad but very good

Wow there is a lot of emotions in this poem and it really hit me hard.