Aw hun, I feel so special hehe the poem was to me tooh weeh, Well done though I loved it, so sweet & cute aww, thank you for that it was a joy to read it hun, you have made my day just when I thought things would go bad you make me smile aww, take care lubb |
by lostlllsoul
Awesome poem u have=) my fav is the lsat stanza.. to me its kinda emotional tee hee xD but seriously it's great job.. if u have the time.. maybe u could check out my poems and maybe tell me how i can improve?? k keep writting!! much love hunn. |
by lostlllsoul
Spelling error *last stanza* =) |
Wow..I liked this one alot too....i feel really bad cuz you have been reading my poems and ive been slackin..well ne way..I love your poems..Love Joclyn |
Omg i'm sooooo happy for you!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is sooo great! i'm really proud of you to have such a good attitude towards life now! i told ya everything would get better! haha. awww hun you have no idea how happy i am for you. i really hope everything works out! and i'll always be here for you- on your good days and bad. lyl~lex |
Really likt it! |
by Jennifer
That was a great poem.. |
by Emma
Awesome! |
Good...Matt is awesome...man...u r 2...I am so happy to see this poem...promise me u'll look at it whenever u feel down...u will be ok...I know that...I'm sure of that...now the light...can u see it now? |
Hey this was awesome..i feel bad caz i dont comment much anymore heaps of things are happening at the moment so life is pretty screwed, but ill get back on track soon..ive been reading though and your writing is still amazing ill get back to you soon with comments k..ive voted on them all though take care hope this turns out to be true and you do find the light i am so happy for you xxx |
by bella
Cool well writeen poem loved it |
by Razorblade
Good, everyone deserves some happiness in life! I wish you the best in your mission to find happiness. |