My Life

This is an awesome poem and like starlight i can deeply relate you are a great poet keep it up!

I can relate to that. Great poem you express yourself well keep up the good work look forword to more

I like this sort of short poem. Its really good. I wish i could write short poems, but I keep going on and on lol

It was breathtaking
thank god it was short or i'd die of suffocation
really had to hold my breath thruout
keep up the good work
dhaval

It may be only a few lines but it's deep.You did an awesome job with it keep writting your good at it.