by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~ Nov 18, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
No one ever believe the words of a child, |
by Solace
I think it's good one of my favorites by you. Very nicely done... xx: |
by Michelle
Pretty good... 5/5! :o) |
by Torn
I like it:P |
5/5 so far! I think; if you want my advice, that is; you should mention something about 'the little boy who cried wolf' for use in comparison or use it for a base to branch out from. nice job so far, very good! |
by Matthew A.
This poem is so sad. The only funny part is the end of it end. Its good and hope you write more. |