by David Paul Nov 18, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
You took a piece of my heart and I don't want it back, |
Great poem, very well written and full of feeling |
Nice poem - very emotional and thats always a good thing. Such optimism and positiveness - well done =) |
by Syn
Very good... but mabey you should consider changing "bur" to "but", in the last stanza. |
by Matthew A.
Wow david so sad that this is true and about whats her name. Its good and I hope you write more soon. |
Very beatiful poem David....truly sad...but very good way of writing.....lataz |