Ehem...okay...does that means the other 2 poem I read is not by you...well...certainly happy to find a poem that you wrote...and man...you are awesome...so good...that...I can't comment...simply flawless...

Hey, you did a wonderful job on this poem.. just really good
5/5

Dear Jane,
The poems I have submitted here are obviously written by me.I do not know what made you feel the other poems were not by me. But if you would please care to explain maybe I could too.

Thank you very much.

5/5. Very nice poem! Keep it up!

Hmm.. This was pretty good.. I felt that some of your rhymes were used just because they rhymed and not because they actually made sense.. The flow was good though except for a few odd lines.. In this, the descriptions were nice and light and actually quite refreshing.. But the way you jumped from subject to subject didn't really appeal to me.. Nicely done though, you have talent 5/5

I have never really read a poem in the catagory before... Interesting... I'm so jealous how you can get your rhyming perfect >.< I liked:
I too have an answer, much more close to reality.
Life is a Sexually transmitted disease with 100% mortality.
It was the best :) hehe
5/5

I liked the other poem i read much better than this one..the flow in this one was pretty off and i didnt vote for it cause it might bring down your rating. i also dont think you should have differnt rhyme schemes in each stanza, that affects the poem a lot. And i didnt much like the last phase "Color Me BADD"...it really threw of the nice ending you could have had. But thats just my opinion. What i really liked though was this phrase
"I too have an answer, much more close to reality.
Life is a Sexually transmitted disease with 100% mortality"
it was so simple and nice with a very nice flow..but unfortunatly it didnt go with the rest of the flow. well keep up the work and thanx for your comments on my work.