Starry Riddle...(Guess!)

by Mezmeryz   Nov 18, 2005


Guess what it is...tell me your ideas..plz!

Shooting like guns,
Sprinkling like glitter,
Flashing like an ambulance light
Swishing like water,
Buzzing like bees,
Sizzling like fizz-pop sprite

Hissing like a snake,
Frizzing like a Frisbee,
Buzzing like flies in the park
Twinkling like stars,
Squeaking like mice,
Exploding like bombs in Iraq

Crashing like thunder,
Whizzing like a cork,
Frizzing like a saucepan on a cooker
Noisy like traffic,
Shining like fairies,
Whining like an angry toddler

Crackling like autumn leaves,
Zooming like darts,
Fading away like winter mist,
In the starry sky
In
The
Dark
Night!

Guess what it is...tell me your ideas..plz!

*please rate or comment on the poem, it will be greatly appreciated and i will comment and rate back all round. Thank- you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kys Dirty Little Secret

    I have no idea what it is But very describing even though i can't figure out what in the world you are talking about. Keep up the great work 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess09

    I have NO earthly idea what it is. Maybe someones dream or fantasy.
    ~~Sweetie

  • 18 years ago

    by ShhhhItsASecret©

    I think it's FIREWORKS! Very good imagery btw, I really liked it. It was very original!

    "Shining like fairies,"

    That was my favorite line :) Great job, keep up the good work!!!

    ~BJ~

  • 18 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Hey you give the game away though dont ya!!! lol