AWW! thats sooo SAD! I hate when ppl lie to me and dont cry

Aw hun thats so sad . It mke me sad , but it was good ,and yes lying hurts everyone I do not like liers but yet everyone lies at sometime .
Nice poem and keep it up
~April~

That's so sad, so much emotion in to it, it's a great peom, but i hope you don't hurt so much anymore...

This is so powerful and descriptive. Full of pain but its very good. Amazing emotion portrayed here. Keep up the great work.

Ps- thanks for the comments