by FlowerThatDied Nov 18, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Though I know my sorrow prolongs, |
by BrokenTessa
Awe that is a cute poem, I havent really had time to read yours or comment on them latly, but I have read a couple of ours tonight. Most of them are good but the way a few of them are writteen is a little wonky. Anyways good work. |
by just a poet
Wow, a heartfelt poem. great use of language to describe your feeling, love the poem. |
by BrokenTessa
Though the Lord up above, |
by BrokenTessa
Very good, and well written...i really like this part.... |
by Nikki
I really liked this poem i have been through the same thing. mine is a little different though my boyfriend is in the marines and i sit by the phone waiting for a call all of the time. anyways i loved it and keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |