I love this poem. I felt this way so many times. Wonder why god made my life so this way. pLease comment and read some of my poems Thanks.

I really liked this poem i have been through the same thing. mine is a little different though my boyfriend is in the marines and i sit by the phone waiting for a call all of the time. anyways i loved it and keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Very good, and well written...i really like this part....

Though the Lord up above,
Fated us to be apart,
I know that really we are not,
Because you're always in my heart.

very good... keep writting..
*Tessa*

Wow, a heartfelt poem. great use of language to describe your feeling, love the poem.

Awe that is a cute poem, I havent really had time to read yours or comment on them latly, but I have read a couple of ours tonight. Most of them are good but the way a few of them are writteen is a little wonky. Anyways good work.
keep it up!
*~*BrokenTessa*~(