Love's Secret Code

by Ann Stareyes   Nov 18, 2005


Sparkle...My precious stars
How I wish upon you
You're always shining like diamonds
Up in Heaven so blue.

I just ask for this one wish
Even though you're far away
Grant me my only dream
If it's just for a day.

Let his love shine
Let the feelings explode
I'll give him the combination to my heart
He'll hold the secret code.

When and if he unlocks it
I'll then let my love flow
I just only have one question
Will he return his secret code??????

© Ann *Stareyes*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tiffany

    Hey, AWESOME poem! it all really flows together and its very truee i love that idea that u came up with to write about it! this poem gets voted as an excellent by me! This poem is so beautiful and it just all makes sense! keep on writin beautiful poems like that! well can u comment on mine sometime,and rate them? thank you if you do!

  • 18 years ago

    by NiCoLe

    Its really good......well done
    please check my poems and comment on them XoXo NiCoLe

  • 18 years ago

    by swill

    Hiiii
    im glad to announce that i was ur 100th voter! 5/5
    i like anything that involves a combo of the sky and love...or stars n love...
    check out my poem...you and the moon...
    that too is abt...THE MOON and love!
    hehe....
    i like your concept of the secret code.
    please write more poems...cos i wanna read more of your words.
    dhaval ^_^

  • 18 years ago

    by Megg

    Rate my poem "with you"
    please

    p.s parts of your poem is confussing
    but I like it

  • 19 years ago

    by Rei

    Hey this is really good. Its awsome. I love it. keep out the poems. Write back.

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