Ann, as always my friend, your talent and heart shine through. You are amazing. I can "feel" this one. Great job.

0hh such a t0uching piece. great j0b 0n this ann. havent heard fr0m y0u in a while. h0pe y0u're d0ing well! g0od j0b 0n this 0ne! keep em c0ming! =)
l0tz 0f l0ve / d0ra

Ann ,
That was so sweet and cute .

I'll give him the combination to my heart
He'll hold the secret code.

I just loved this part ..You can almost picture the turning of the knobs to numbers as he unlocks it..
Another beauty Ann ,

*tear*...this peice made me cry..it was short but an amazing write...wow me and Luanne pictured the same thing! i too pictured someone pressing in numbers as in a code when I read that part!! You are such a gifted writer and I admire you so much for that! Hope everything is well Ann, this poem didn't seem as if you were happy? Myabe it only appealed to me that way, but as if you are sadened by love at the moment..You are always in my prayers and thats no lie! I love this peice and love you too!
~Chelsey~

What emotion and feeling in this write. Beautifully written and bit romantic too. Did you get his secret code?? Truly love this write Ann.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Beautiful poem Ann. Very well written.
As always, I loved it.
Take care & God bless

Ann,
what a beautiful penned you've done here, it was an awesome poem! i'm blessed to have a friend like you, have a great, hugs.

bert.

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Hey, i got shivers in my back....was good...mwah

Hey this is really good. Its awsome. I love it. keep out the poems. Write back.

Rate my poem "with you"
please

p.s parts of your poem is confussing
but I like it

Hiiii
im glad to announce that i was ur 100th voter! 5/5
i like anything that involves a combo of the sky and love...or stars n love...
check out my poem...you and the moon...
that too is abt...THE MOON and love!
hehe....
i like your concept of the secret code.
please write more poems...cos i wanna read more of your words.
dhaval ^_^

Its really good......well done
please check my poems and comment on them XoXo NiCoLe

Hey, AWESOME poem! it all really flows together and its very truee i love that idea that u came up with to write about it! this poem gets voted as an excellent by me! This poem is so beautiful and it just all makes sense! keep on writin beautiful poems like that! well can u comment on mine sometime,and rate them? thank you if you do!