....This was very unique.... i haven't read anyhting like this before...it worked well though...it was very long so maybe if you were looking tomake improvements you could shorten it....just a suggestion...

Thanks for your comment, i really appreciate it.

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Gud effort, but i felt it more like a story, not a poem.. i mean, ther was no rhyme or flow.. jus an endless flow of words.. but the words wer gud, and wer very expressive.. i can see it has reli gud ratings, so im givin u a 4.. gud work
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NannO

That was very beautiful!! I have read one or two poems about the titanic, this is now among my favorites. It felt like I was right there experiencing it!! Great job, keep writing!!

I really liked this... you did an excellent job writing and portraying a character... very nice... keep it up

sammie

I love this poem and i really c the emotion that u have in this poem...and i have to say that i really like it...keep up the great work...and never change the way that u write...5/5

Very very good.. i enjoy your work.

This was great..The Titanic is one of my favorite movies . Reading your poem was like seeing a new scene.....wxcellent work....5/5

Titanic was like the bbbeeesssttt movie ever. i cry EVERY single time i watch it. it just breaks my heart to watch such love and passion be broken apart by a watery death. you captured that day quite well. 5/5 love.

Wow that was good

the end was soo sad

5/5 keep it up :P

Wow!!...it is soo good..i don't mean any disrespect when i say this but i laughed when it came to the name mentioned as micheal angelo..but then a couple lines later!...wow!!..the emotion is so strong, whew!!!..it was great!! 5/5
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