Hey aaron
wow....i really was holding my breath....i hate to think that you dont know where you're going to....where your life is going to....i hope someday things will change for you...i will hope someday you will be able to write a happy ending.
everything you write is amazing as it is. keep ur head up, babes
thinking of u,
*rachel*

GOOD ONE I RLY LIKE IT THOUGH I DONT UNDERSTADN THE LAST LINE ABOUT YOU MOM...SRY BUT WHAT I DO UNDERSTAND RLY CAPTURES ME. GOOD JOB. KEEP WRITING, PLEASE! XXlissa

I loved it

Good one friend! Interesting poem!

Well...i got all of it till the end. whats up with the mom thing? i like it though. well written!

Hm.. You have amazing storyies behind your poetry..you just need to work on flow like I said once before. I also know what your going threw during this stage as well. When this happens to me, I get extremely outraged. I do things I regret..and things I sometimes don't. You have to do what you think it right, and what will help you in the long run.

-Jennifer.

Overall Rating: 3/5