by Always4You Nov 18, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
She carves harsh words on her chest |
Good peice, good expression and strong content. the flow is pretty smooth thoughout with only small rough areas which quickly recover |
by Gretchen
I thought this was really good...very sad but very good. I liked the rhyming it seemed to flow well...There is one line that didnt flow well with the others and that was Watching her blood drain |