Letting Go

by Always4You   Nov 18, 2005


She carves harsh words on her chest
Feelings that she cant express
Wishes that she could die
Wonders why she even tries
Sits there alone, in the dark
Takes her knife and makes a mark
Sits in a corner, cutting her vein
Watching her blood drain
Freezing in her room, she sees her breath
Wants a quick and painless death
Lies there alone dying
Out of no where, she starts crying
Her life was a living hell
Covers her mouth, trys not to yell
She cant let people know
That she is giving up
Letting Go

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  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Good peice, good expression and strong content. the flow is pretty smooth thoughout with only small rough areas which quickly recover

  • 18 years ago

    by Gretchen

    I thought this was really good...very sad but very good. I liked the rhyming it seemed to flow well...There is one line that didnt flow well with the others and that was Watching her blood drain
    needs another word or something to go with the flow more but i like what it says so I dont know if I would change it lol good job!