Why??

by John (Mr. Whuppy)   Nov 18, 2005


Why does heartache affect the heart?
When the thoughts are in your head,
What makes the pulses race with speed?
And not your brain instead
Or does it give your head an ache?
And assist your thoughts to whir
Into a sumptuous whirlpool
Where all your thoughts do stir;
The reason that I ask this
Is plain as it can be
I suffer all these feelings
Are you feeling just like me?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    Another Masterpiece John.
    Keep up the great work.

    Love
    Letty

  • 18 years ago

    by me

    Great poem i liked it....5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Normal is the Watchword

    The poem was written well meaning wise. I think maybe next time try to get the emotions across to the reader instead of just explaining them. Otherwise, I really liked your explainations.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    I loved it.. really deep.. deeper than what I ever thought 'deep' could be.. just amazing haha no other words to describe about this poem at this moment =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana

    Really nice write. This is sad but it sounds like it definately comes from experience. Nice job.

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