Comments : Why??

  • 18 years ago

    by lisa marie

    This was a nice poem. It flowed nice and i liked the whole idea.

  • 18 years ago

    by lisa marie

    This was a nice poem. It flowed nice and i liked the whole idea.

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Wow what a great poem... I loved the way you wrote this, it sounds like it came straight from the mind. Hopefully we all find out the answers to these questions someday... cause I hate feeling like this. =) Keep up the excellent writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana

    Really nice write. This is sad but it sounds like it definately comes from experience. Nice job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    I loved it.. really deep.. deeper than what I ever thought 'deep' could be.. just amazing haha no other words to describe about this poem at this moment =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Normal is the Watchword

    The poem was written well meaning wise. I think maybe next time try to get the emotions across to the reader instead of just explaining them. Otherwise, I really liked your explainations.

  • 18 years ago

    by me

    Great poem i liked it....5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    Another Masterpiece John.
    Keep up the great work.

    Love
    Letty