by lisa marie
This was a nice poem. It flowed nice and i liked the whole idea. |
by lisa marie
This was a nice poem. It flowed nice and i liked the whole idea. |
by TinyDancer46
Wow what a great poem... I loved the way you wrote this, it sounds like it came straight from the mind. Hopefully we all find out the answers to these questions someday... cause I hate feeling like this. =) Keep up the excellent writing! |
by Ariana
Really nice write. This is sad but it sounds like it definately comes from experience. Nice job. |
by Lovely Bones
I loved it.. really deep.. deeper than what I ever thought 'deep' could be.. just amazing haha no other words to describe about this poem at this moment =) |
The poem was written well meaning wise. I think maybe next time try to get the emotions across to the reader instead of just explaining them. Otherwise, I really liked your explainations. |
by me
Great poem i liked it....5/5 |
by Letty
Another Masterpiece John. |