Its a gud poem bj. your firt life one. yayness.
long time no talk btw. well i dunno what else to say. but keep up the work. it was a gud one. hugz n kisses.

Great poem I like it...ur a wonderful poet hun, you use such great words to write down and they mend so well together, I added you to my favorites I really like your work and think you can go far with ur work
Juls

This poem is awsome, your really talented

Hey this a great poem Bj i can relate to this poem, altough what u say is true , it is hard for some to do , u cant always express ur feelings expecially if u dont noe how . But all in all it is greta poem keep up the great work

Great poem you wrote it really very well.

i can't think of any titles taht fit any better than the one you have..but i was never any good at titles

Wow ...damn... thats really good...glad u recommended it...wow....heh and im not the natural optimist but thats real good...kiu

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Wow BJ thats a great poem wow thats like all i can say WOW keep it up hun ttyl hugs n kisses Laura Marie aka sweets xoxo

That's a very good poem. havent read anything like it/ the titles fine. its just right. keep writing. doig a great job

Very powerful message, and it is wonderfully sweet. Great job on this one...I really like it. I think the title is perfect, and everything about it was great. Good rythm and flow...and you kept the rhyme scheme without losing the meaning. Keep it up, as I told you--you have a lot of talent. Take Care.

~rolo

Damn this is good..this is a very good poem and it has a lot of good rhymes and I also think the title is perfect.

BJ, this is a beautiful poem and I love it. It`s really touching &just amazingly sweet. Keep writing, okay? I love reading your poems.

Hiya BJ dat poem is sooo good ur a pro keep it up love ya heaps Aimee xoxo

Awesome poem 5/5 ^_^ very well written!!!! Keep up the good work!! Hope to read more !!!!

Take care

Ali

Awww hun dis was reli gwd...great work u hav talent hehe.. n i felt heaps of emotion as wel...keep it al up gal..givin it a 5/5..luv ya
mwaz luv dia

Awwww. That made me feel better. (: It's a very sweet poem. [: Bingy Jingy Thingy :) 5/5

-Yingy Lingy Thingy xD

This is verry good i gave it a 5

This is verry good i gave it a 5

Wow. It's beautiful, Bj. :) Very encouraging... lol The cowardly lion... Sry, lol. Great poem, though. It's very well written and i love the flow, sweetheart! *huggles* Me luff youse!

~Jessica

It was so plesant

Bj, that is a great poem. I loved how you assured the person that you will be there no matter what, and help out. You're a great writer. Hope to read more of your work of art.

-Love always, Jennifer.