Wow...gr8 work. i love your vocabulary, and the rhymes weren't forced at all! I really loved this poem, and Ihope you keep up the gr8 work! 5/5!
~*Who Cares?*~

I really liked this poem, as for a different title, I seem to like it the way it is. It seems to fit the poem nicely.

Firstly, I think the title is perfect, so don’t worry about that. This is a very encouraging poem, this seems like one of those poems that touch people, and they open up. It was written very well and for the most, it had a good flow. I can see a few things that could be improved though. The third stanza seems to have forced rhyme and the fourth stanza doesn't rhyme. The only other thing I can say is maybe think about some punctuation to break this lengthy poem up a bit. Keep writing.

Wow... this was amazing... you are very talented... keep it up!

sammie

Wow... this was amazing... you are very talented... keep it up!

sammie

HOLY CRAP!!! that was an amazing poem BJ!!!! u are amazing! it went together just perfectly and the ending was ...........i dont know what else to say other than perfect!! great poem. i love ya lots!

Wow that was amazing. I loved it. Excellent poem. 5/5

Nice job with this poem! I love that the meaning that it is sending out!@ I can totlaly realete to this in a way where it could help me out inmy own life. I just want to say AWESOME job! 5/5

~stevie~
~yellowfeverlime~

This is a very optimistic piece, I think it is quite original. Some of your lines blend into this really nicely - 'Feelings are not something to hide
Your tears will not make you look weak'

When I read some of the stanzas I got the impression that the last lines did not round off the stanza - instead the idea or topic you were going with seemed to end prematurely.
I thought the ending was sweet and fit in with the rest of piece perfectly.

Hey that was a wonderful poem. its so touching and sweet...keeep it up. hey the titles good but i was thinking...'guide to cloud nine' was a good bit from the poem too..its upto you because even your title gives a straight idea of the poem.
xxx

You are such a gifted writer.
I wish I could write like you!
This poem really reached out to me and I can relate a lot.
5/5

WHOA!!!!!!!!!!!
this poem just blew me away...(i think thats y my computer kicked me off lol..u should now wut i mean lol ) but it was awsome!!!!!! the message was clear the structure was great and the words were very powerful...it was just PERFECT!!!! definatly a 5/5
-Roxy-

Beautiful words and a very good message....

Awesome poem BJ! there is a great flow to it and none of the rhymes were forced! there is also a great idea behind the poem. i'm sure that if eveyone read that poem their would be less depression around here. lol.. 5/5! keep it up!

This poem was amazing. so amazing. i liked it alot and i adore the rhyme scheme.

Happy Holidays,

~David

Wow.. this is such a beautiful poem! its so inspiring.. it can inspire not to give up on their life when everything just seems to be falling apart.. this is a very very very well written poem.. there is so much emotion in this poem.. it will help a lot of people realize there still a lot of good in the world we just have to find it and stay strong!

sorry for not commneting earlier

awesome poem keep it up =) hreat write!!!

--emotionless19*

Amazing message to everyone reading it. Great work again and keep writing and you will go far with it.

Juls

This was an amazing poem that should alot of emotion, emotion that you can feel from just reading it , i was done very well . I second this poem completely i happen to be going through the same thing , and i know how difficult it can be , but many ppl dont know the difference between in love and love , those 2 things are very different .Good job and keep up the great work , bye hun and take care

Wow you r so good keep writing i love your work!

love always
tabby

5/5 this a top notch poem good job
shit it could help anyone.