That was unbeleivable! It was amazxing, i wish i could write a poem like that :)

This is very good. the rhyme and flow are great. this is the type of poem that would make me get through the tough times. nice job!

My god.
this was amazing.
wow.
it totally just made my day. Wow.
I've just gone through something and now I feel like I can get through it.
Amazinf job.
♥

My god.
this was amazing.
wow.
it totally just made my day. Wow.
I've just gone through something and now I feel like I can get through it.
Amazinf job.
♥

Great!

Interesting topic. Very inspirational

This poem was great!!! 5/5!! I think the title you picked fit it!! the flow and rhyme was good!! Keep it up!!

I Know Too Many People In My Life That Feel This Way, They Think Their Too Strong To Be Weak, Not Realizing Strength Is In Your Tears 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Hunn, the title, I think, is perfectly fine. This poem actually kind of helped me out in a way. I could relate to it a lot. I gave you a 5/5 on this because the flow and pattern was great and the whole thing all together was excellent. I love it.

>black&&blue

Wow, a great poem, very well written.
5/5
i really like it.

Brandy --
Great poem! The amount of emotion && imagery you put into this was limitless. Truly amazing. I see a vision of a famous poet coming your way, take advantage of all your talents and just love life. You`re a great writer, keep it up. Your love and talent for writing can, and will, take you far. 5/5

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

I especielly liked the last line the soul that will stay Haven`t found many of them around! I like the direct way you write.

Hey Great work on this poem, it was very inspirational and it really showed that you care about the person, you did an amasing job on this poem.

--Steph

You have no idea how much this means to me. I love this poem! everytime i feel like letting it all go i will read this. great job.

Wow this poem is so good. I loved the flow of it as well.

Aww this is a very beautiful and sweet poem. defiantly what people should hear. the rhyming was amazing and the flow was good too. keep writing! 5/5

~Kristina

This is a great poem. Although it may have bad rhyming on some parts (was it planned) and the flow was choppy, the overall message and the imagery made this poem potent.

5/5

OMG!! I |L|O|V|E| this poem!!!

I really enjoyed it, 5/5!