Wowity...i like it but it was a bit wierd wen u metioned the "Oh babe I'm lost forever,
In your beauty,
In your eyes,
I could have never imagined such a cutie" but i likey likey...
lolac naomi

Wow your girl must be spoiled, any girl having that written for her and about her is the luckest girl alive, nice poem i like the:
Oh great god of the world,
Thank you for having me in mind,
When you created my girl,
Thank you for being so kind.

Oh babe I'm lost forever,
In your beauty,
In your eyes,
I could have never imagined such a cutie.
part its so so so so cute