True..i loevd the content, the idea and even the voac of this poem but the structure and flow was a bit of..i think it could be improved a lot but it's good!!
keep writing xoxoxo

I love it! its such an excellent idea, and so true, i can really relate! great poem, 5/5!
xx emma xxx

Good poem. not the best but still good.
keep it up
tara xxx