This is a REALLY good poem...keep it up

Aww it's so cute. ^_^ I see that you take great passion and emotion in writing your poems. I liked the flow to this one, and the emotion was definately straight from the heart. Keep it up. =) 5/5 xxoo

Samantha

Absolutely lovely. Wonderful poem.

You soon came around and we stood side by side
And whatever came at us we took in our stride
The battles not over yet, but we'll soon be free
As long as you keep on fighting for me

Especially loved these lines.

Great write.
Jeannie

Excellent poem I can relate. thanks for your comments on "Leave it on the down low" & "My Superhero". I fixed that spot in "MySuper hero" thank u for pointing that out I didnt relize that I done that.