Aw woo, this is awesome hun, very good point made in this poem though, I loved the second verse it was awesome, well done, take care

Wow...amazing!!!! never give up hope, you never know what life has reserved for you. thank you sooo much for your comments, they mean so much :D stay strong and take care.
-xXx-

Very nicely written. I loved it..
Deserves nothing but a 5/5 xx:

blaine *> : PainOfOne

Nice poem i'll give it a 5

Sheer genius hunny, I really loved it. The diction was amazing the flow the form.. mind blowing. Thankyou so much for you loving comments they mean alot to me, I look forward to reading more from you

Much love
Jenn

Great poem! I so feel that way like I want to break out of what im in but im afrais that if i do.. i wont be liking what i find is outside of my s.i. anyways thank you for commenting me i always do the same back!
5/5-Rachel

It was okay but i think that you can do better

Great poem. it's short but gets the point and feeling across to the reader which is all you need. you are a talented poet never stop writing i enjoy your work

~Jacklyn

Awosome
my poems dont ryme
i suck at it
but yours is great!

I really like your poem and d it is something real. However I feel I must give you some constuctive critism and tell you that you need to work on flow.
Also it might just be me and how I read so don't take it personally.

I really like your poem and d it is something real. However I feel I must give you some constuctive critism and tell you that you need to work on flow.
Also it might just be me and how I read so don't take it personally.

You have to...we cannot lose...even if we did...we can always play again...until we win...there's no use being a loser...besides...u r still young...this is only the beginning of the road...look at those adults...ur gram...ur parents...although it's hard for them...they still continue to survive in this world...so never give up hope on a better life...k...luv ya hun...always

Wow! awesome! good job!
a deep msg has been conveyed in few words. keep it up dear!

Awesome, awesome, awesome!!!

I love this poem "extremely dark"
its awesome!!!!

Great! Loved it! Keep on writing! Could have worked on the end but 5! *Props*

Keep on living!
-Jin