Hate(the strongest word)

by Tragic Misery   Nov 18, 2005


Hate

hard to believe a word could tear you apart as much as this 4-letter word does

It spews out of your enemies mouth, and worse of all the mouths of those you try to please

It can turn happiness to sadness
which can lead to depression from the feeling of isolation

The hatred can turn your heart to stone You no longer trust your real friends suddenly everyones out to get you

Then it becomes too much to take
you find yourself turning towards a knife for comfort You say it won't become a habit but it already has

Then one night after months of questioning your life and your purpose in the world you pick up the knife and slash and slash yourself till you can no longer feel the hate or anything at all

The power of the hate was too much for you, you were too weak to stop it from creeping into your soul and hiding out

Then that fateful night it took control of you and sent you into your slashing rage, and killed you

If only hate were just a four letter

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow.. that was an amazingly powerful poem, i could feel myself cringing when i read this stanza::

    Then one night after months of questioning your life and your purpose in the world you pick up the knife and slash and slash yourself till you can no longer feel the hate or anything at all

    this is definetely a 5/5!
    jessy

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    I bet most people have never thought about a single word in such detail before...

    very good poem, loads of emotion and well written.

  • 18 years ago

    by xX-jess-Xx

    Very tru. honesty hurst sometimes. great poem jesxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Too too, its harsh honesty is almost shocking, and yet it offered insight into the depressive ravings of cutters. Thank you for sharing.

    Good Writing!
    beth

  • 19 years ago

    by unprotected lover

    Omg i love this poem, it made me cry, i told my best firend i hated him right before he got locked up, we still talk and are close but i dont think i can ever say i hate you to anyone with out crying again