WOW.. EXCELLENT!!! thats all i have to say lol... you really described every feeling that comes with the word of hate brilliantly.. 5/5.. well done and keep up the great work.. bec xox

Gr8 work....i luvd the emmotion in it...it was wonderful...keep up the gr8 work! 5/5!
~*Who Cares?*~

Excellent meaning, great command of the language nicely done

Great poem. That was really well done. It had a great meaning and I enjoyed reading it.

Alot of emotion. I like the idea, but it sounds more like an essay or statement than a poem, organize the stanzas a little better, and maybe add some more "poetic language"

I like it. very creative. good job.

If only...this poem is good...no doubt...it deserves a 5.

I liked it:) what I didnt like is you only used like 2 commas and like no periods lol (I get on everyone for this) but it truly looks nicer and... Makes your poem flow better, gives it a rhythm, and gets the reader more into the. Periods just help tell the reader a sentence is over! Anyways good job.

I really enjoyed reading this poem, i can really relate...you had my eyes stuck to the screen from beginin to end...well done

Omg i love this poem, it made me cry, i told my best firend i hated him right before he got locked up, we still talk and are close but i dont think i can ever say i hate you to anyone with out crying again

Too too, its harsh honesty is almost shocking, and yet it offered insight into the depressive ravings of cutters. Thank you for sharing.

Good Writing!
beth

Very tru. honesty hurst sometimes. great poem jesxx

I bet most people have never thought about a single word in such detail before...

very good poem, loads of emotion and well written.

Wow.. that was an amazingly powerful poem, i could feel myself cringing when i read this stanza::

Then one night after months of questioning your life and your purpose in the world you pick up the knife and slash and slash yourself till you can no longer feel the hate or anything at all

this is definetely a 5/5!
jessy