by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden Nov 18, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I don't remember now and then |
Gruesome poem well written |
I love the 3x repetition you use. Its very effective in the flow... and it makes the poem more enjoyable to read. I felt like I was getting into it... 5/5 |
Loved this one, very deep and itense kept you completely gripped well done |
I visualized it really well, even hearing the sounds in my head "BOOM" 5/5 for a very well detailed poem |
That was an amazing poem with a grrt feel to it....i like the way u break up words and use actual sounds...it gives such emotion to it.....i love the metaphors too the drugs and credit card reference were very orginal....thx for ur shout out and comments..... |