Beautiful, dearest. I love how you use so many different adjectives in this. I assume this was a personal poem, so there is nothing more i can type about it.

5/5, obviously.

I liked the poem. You write beautifully.
You use the senses to portray the poem.
Like touch, and such.
I loved it.
I love you.

Love Alicia

That was an awesome piece of poetry.
If your interested read Broken Doll.

Darkest Wishes
Matt