Hey....this poem is way deep. I love the way you incorporated the story to actually make the rhyming functional....this should be a featured poem! Keep writing this stuff....and u could be famous

That was so beautiful! it was an excellent write.. keep it up! -peace-

Omfg. so true.

Hey edds!
hope ur ok dude? man, ive missed u so much! :-(
please comment back so i no ur cool?!
not much has happend tho mate so no new news......boring!!
glad ur gettin better!
lots and lots of love
*WeSsIe*
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Wow...that was....im out of words to explain it but it was...wow...it was a very very sad poem. i loved the way it was written, everything just flowed! oh and i added you to my favorites!! great poem!! 5/5
~*Katherine*~