Dang!!! Dude, this is a great
read indeed. Its like the circle
of life from being born and
living out your lives to when
we passover and live forever.

This sacred darkness will leave us soon
(I think sacred darkness is the womb)

and we will return to light
(I think return to light is being born)

and then the clocks will turn to noon
and the light retreats from sight
(I think these two lines are our lives lived out)

and then the light will never leave
and we will never fear for all is right
(I think these two lines are when we
die and live in eternity)

Excellent job no doubt Write On,
Bogie

Well.. with this one.. I loved how you assured the reader there will be no fear. A lovely job with this one.