This poem was incredible. i wanted to give it more than five. i totally get what you're saying and you put it all so well. great use of sybilence too, that worked so well. im so jealous, i can not write as well as that

Beautiful poem....very deep. You had me thinking so bad, the flow of the words. I could hear your voice through these lines. Very emotional and inspiring. Keep up the good work.

::MELI::