Wow, Thats really good!!
The flow was great and everything went together!
I really enjoyed reading it and I hope shes okay!
It was a nice thing to dedicate a poem to someone you care about!
Well done x)

It's pretty nice! lot of emotion, lot of beauty! keep writing!

Oh...so...is she ok now? Well...hope she is...I hope she will recover soon...she must be a good person...for you seem to care much about her...well...send her my regards...

Well I hope she is okay now but she sounds like she has people that care bout her like you so hope she feels better. Great poem hun, keep writing u r good at it.
Juls

Ahh, thats sweet. I hope your babysitter will be okay. Greatly written, 5/5
‡God Bless

**Whoops, Minus that dagger part, lol, I was trying to make the cross thing.

It has alot of emotion in it i really like it it sounds very deep

I like this. yuo can really feel yuor emotions

This is an excellent poem hun and deserves higher ratings! ^_^

Aww thats sad

Awww. i like it. your a good writer. keep up the good work! lyl~lex

I love the way you set out your poetry, you have such talent
luv em

I like all your poems and i like this one too, its hard when friends you care about end up in the hospital, sometimes even more then when its family, for me neways. i like the poem and i like the rhym scheme of it. thanks for sharing