Hi,
Honestly..there was something lacking in the start...as the words didnt carried that weight...but as the poem carries on...it started to mean a lot...take care..hope u would not mind me being honest...

Hell no, I want to get better.. I can't do that if noone's honest... thnX

That was really good and very sad......

Love Julie

I liked it a lot and i don't know if was intentional but when the poem switches mood the rhyms(sp?) and rhythm breaks down which i found was very effective
xaaronx

I can completely relate to this poem, read my poem titled "Best Friends" it has a similar feeling. Good job!