Wow hunn this is an awesome piece.. this actually happens in our everyday life.. in circumstances we could be the old lady, writer, ben and his mates, mum or anyone involved.. yet u made it into a poem so exciting to read.. great job.. hoping to read more of your works soon.. I'm addin u to my favs.. gonna go check out your other poems now.. much love.

Hey thanx..you were already in ma favz list..lol..thanx and keep up your good work too!!

Wow, that's so sad.
I'm sorry that happened to you,
If it did happen.
Great writing, and I like the way you make your poems flow.
5/5

Heya, it was good. Hope it's not true xxx

This is soo cute. It is like what you would think all the little nerdy guys that get beat up are thinking and how they feel. Some parts the rhyme seems a littled forced. And 1 question you never said why the boy would take the blame in the first place??
~~Sweetie