This poem is so sad.Im sorry to hear that two people died at the age of seventeen,if this poem is true, but good job writing it! thank you for commenting on mine!

Thanks for the reply to my poem yeah it is unfortunatle true two of my friends died in a car crash keep up the poetry
ps dunno if i sent this to you already xx

This is a good poem i like it, it shows so much emotion and how much you care.. 5/5 please leave a comment on mine

Awesome poem, you are a wonderful writer, keep it up! 5/5