The Blue-Eyed Girl

by Mezmeryz   Nov 19, 2005


She glanced at the shop window,
On a cold and rainy day
Saw a chalk white face,
She had a lot to say.

Didnt murmur a sound
Or whisper a word,
Her sea-water eyes told the story,
Of her dark and dreary world.

She was running away from the home she lived in,
In her life she had bared too much pain
She had endured it all, from the threats to the beatings,
She carried the scars of the knife and the cane.

She had thought of suicide
Attempted self-harm
She had even held her fathers gun,
But she had thrown them aside.
The thought and the weapons.
She wanted a future,
But she sought help from no-one.

She could look no-where else
Besides the face in the window,
The blue eyes held her there.
The story so full of darkness,
Gave sorrow,
But she wanted no other care.

She forcefully dragged her gaze from the window,
And started running as fast as she can
She did not know where she was going,
Just thinking of the blue-eyed girl,
She had no plan.

She realised she knew the girls face in the window,
The face that was white as pearl
The girl in the window was someone she knew,
She was the blue-eyed girl.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Wow, this was really great, i loved this....gr8 work...keep up the wunderful work!!!!! 5/5!

    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 18 years ago

    by aliiiii

    I'm with Ipsitalostintime , it is hard to except yourself. and you can always find your imperfections. Someday though...you have to except it and it will stick. but its really good. true. you should check out some of mine.

  • 18 years ago

    by Truly in Love

    All i have to say is 'wow'... really, i thought this poem was very deep.. It's difficult to look your self in the eye and except who you really are...
    Nice work.. i think you beautifully coveyed your feelings...
    5/5
    Much Love,
    Ipsita

  • 18 years ago

    by allison

    That was a really good poem, Het you to realize people come to face that they are verything they hate. Really well written, I loved it.
    Love always,
    Allison

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Hey...cute poem..I love it...me love blue eyes...to bad my eyes isn't blue...lol...