I can relate to ur poem..i really liked it!!:)

Great poem. I like the wording of "broken smile" i think that it gives a new spin on what many people would put as "fake" "false" ect....

Wow I like this poem it is very very good... i have one called broken smile as well :>:>

I live this everyday..i can relate to it.. keep it up

Wow I can tottally relate, good work. As a suggestion though, in line 2&3 "really" seems redundant. other than that Good work!

Very true, for me I call it faking a smile. Broken smile sounds good too though. Good poems, I enjoyed them.

Wow i bet a lot of people can relate to this, great job nice topic and i love the repetition of the title

keep it up
-Sara

That sounded like it really came from the heart. You did a great job.

This poem comes across as an anxious cry to hide behind a smile. I liked how you broke up the poem with the line "my broken smile"and then carried on to another aspect of the smile. A sad poem, keep writing.

I like this poem. I thought you did a good job in calling it a 'broken smile' instead of 'fake' or 'false'.

OMG, "Without my broken smile
You would know everything
I won't let that happen " That is so true hun, wow I feel like that is me in the poem, this is an amazing poem, very creative and heartfelt, amazing, your words are magic hun, take care

Awesome poem... i can totally relate to it

CUte poem has a lot of feeling in it.
~~Sweetie