Haiku

by aaron 1 remo   Nov 19, 2005


Blue refreshing cool
trickling through my finger tips
splitter splutter wet

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    I love the first line. Just reading it is so refreshing in itself.

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Very relaxing with nice detailed imagery.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow! this was so powerful.. very good for only 17 syllables! i loved it, it was so pretty and the imagery was great! thank youu for the comment! excellent write! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by sarahAnn

    LOL that was cute baby!!!!
    Love ur girl Sarah

  • 18 years ago

    by Natasha

    * clapping in my seat! * I really, really love this poem.
    I have honestly never read anything so short, and powerful before...
    *Deep boW*

    XxXNatashAXxX

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