Excellent poem. It has a great message. Keep up the great writting.
--Sarah--

I like i told you i liked it earlier i want you to make me a poem you have excellent words! love laura!

Thsi once is amazing..i love ti aaron. i was clinging to every word! excellent job! xox LISSA

I lyk uer way wif words i reali do its great no wonda u lyk it !!
luv emma

Damn, that's good! Now this one I can relate to very well.
I used to be the girl in the open doorway, looking up to the ones with a bed..
very well written, cool, cool.. =D

and the circle continues. All the best,
~*TasH*~

U r good at writing poems

Wow..amazing poem!!! thanks for your comment :D keep it up.
-xXx-

What a truthful poem, and it is an issue that needs to be dealt with. I liked you how set the mood with lovely descriptions for the first few lines, and then you went on to talk about others with out these privileges. Now for some improvement suggestions...
First few lines are lovely with the descriptions but I think you overdid the "ing." I know there are only a few but when you read it, the ings make it sound wordier than it has to be. The sixth line doesn’t make sense to me, maybe you meant "but there's a thought that won't stop running through my head."
On the very last line it should be "your," and maybe think about capitalizing every "I" because this will neaten up the poem and make it grammatically correct.
Sort these out and it will be a poem to be proud of, Keep writing.

GREAT poem baby
*kisses* sarah

Hey, how did you know that(you'll have the same thoughts running through you're head.)? great poem anyway.
I also liked the ending and the beginning. really wonderful job.
keep it up.
marjan

Aww that was good baby
keep up the good poems

The spelling of 'you're' in the last line should be 'your.'
You have quite an original style of writing, I can read more than one theme in this, there's the whole idea of nature but also the underlining message that everyone can enjoy it and should try to. I think you've weaved these ideas together well.

Aaron baby never stop thinking about me and keep trying to come on here and talk with me i love you loads and hope to chat with you SOON baby
Ilove you aaron ttyl!
xoxxxxo

I really like your poem =) its written very good and so detailed with views and emotions both. keep up the good poems.

Very open-mindedly written, young man, keep up the good work!

Niice poem got me thinkiin botu some thiings iis really gud well buh byezzzzzzzzz keep doiin ur thiing loll

Gabby B.K.A.L1l M1zZ T34RZ

Excellent poem, very well written, good imagery. certainly makes one think of how fortunate we are.

This was awesome! Loved the last line. Really cool! Tehe, And the way you opened up the poem was good aswell. && Thanks for your comments =D 5/5

`taleee xx

Another great poem! good imagery and descriptions, and a good message! :) the only problem i find with it, is that you use the word warm a lot, maybe you could use different words and i think it would flow better then! great poem! xox

That is absolutely beautiful. I especially love the twist at the end, for it was really unexpected until you keep going furthur down. Great job on this one my friend. So relevant to society and everyday life. I especially love this line "Jack frost visits everyone the same.
no matter of class status or even name"

I LOVE that! It holds a real lesson that everyone on this earth should know. A real thought provoker. It's wierd, because I feel like that on winter mornings, and I take it for granted, even though I know it shouldn't. This poem gave me a different perspective, LOVE IT!!! Can't really say much more then that ;P