Your there when I am down and bring me up
You stay up all night talking on the phone with me you were the first girl I kissed I found out what I wanted to be after that kiss, you were the one who showed me how to kiss you were the one who told me he wasnt wroth it you were the one who said it will be all right you were the one who said I will all ways be here you were the one who said I love you, you were the one.
I like your poems, but a lot of them are really sad...oh well. All my friend's poetry is sad.
But I really like this one, it's very sweet and pretty. I think it's neat that you have a poem about your best friend. Not many people would do that.
Other than that, I just think you should work on your spacing; it would make your poems easier to read. Pretty cool, though! =^_^=