Great words, great song. It has a very ambigious style. Very thought provoking with much visionary passion.

I have added you onto my favourites lists I really like your style.

Regards
Hayley

I think this is a great idea for a song. you shoul really play it in ur band. very well written.

-Suzie
xoxo

I thought it was a song ^_^ well written..well done :) Rosie xXx

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Once again sorry for the comment
I was a self centered cow for writing that
Jesus i cant believe I said that
anyway
sorry
Great poem
I like the bit about the canvas
blank and white
great use of the English language
Em

Wow! im adding u 2 my favorites!