Broken

by ~lost*and*lonely~   Nov 20, 2005


You broke it once.you broke it twice.
now you leave me broken inside.
I'm in the dark all alone.
waiting for you to reclaim your throne.
but you don't come back, just leave me wondering what it is that i lack.
so i take out my friend, the one who cuts me.
and start stabbing my heart o so deep.
i broke it once, but it wont be twice.
for the first time took my life

plz comment I'm really trying to get better

dedicated to my boyfriend!

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  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    I had to comment on it once more hehe, i was wondering could i send this to my friend, i think she needs to read it

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Aw hun, this is a beautiful poem and I love how at the end you said I'm trying to get better, aw, I can relate to that line more than anything, eventhough it wasn't technically part of the poem, this is well done, take care and im always here for ya if you need help,xxoo

  • 18 years ago

    by Nahibi Maldonado

    Awesome poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by Robin

    Oh my god, u dont actually cut and crap do u?? if u need sumone to chat with, Ill always be here for u!

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    I liked it hun,,especially the second half..that bit was great.
    Thanks for your comments, i truly appreciate them but havent been on for a while..
    read ur poems when i can i promise..
    xoxo

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