Comments : Broken

  • 19 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    Great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Awww this is sad,I can definetly relate to this one right now, aww well done hun, thanks for commenting on my poems it means a lot, this is great though, keep it up lubb

  • 19 years ago

    by Juls

    Wow its good but sad. I know how it is to cut but im trying to stop. But guys can be jerks sometime but us girls RULE THE WORLD!!!lol anyway good work and I would love to see more of ur work. Thanks for comenting my poem and yes Joe is a great friend. Well I here for u if u want to talk just email me sometime!5/5
    Juls
    *Aka~ Julie*

  • 19 years ago

    by christina marie

    Awwww, that's a great poem, it's so sad n sweet. thnx for all the comment lots of love

    Xo*Xo
    **Lolli**
    aka
    **Mimi**

  • 19 years ago

    by Torn

    I liked it hun,,especially the second half..that bit was great.
    Thanks for your comments, i truly appreciate them but havent been on for a while..
    read ur poems when i can i promise..
    xoxo

  • 19 years ago

    by Robin

    Oh my god, u dont actually cut and crap do u?? if u need sumone to chat with, Ill always be here for u!

  • 19 years ago

    by Nahibi Maldonado

    Awesome poem!

  • 19 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Aw hun, this is a beautiful poem and I love how at the end you said I'm trying to get better, aw, I can relate to that line more than anything, eventhough it wasn't technically part of the poem, this is well done, take care and im always here for ya if you need help,xxoo

  • 19 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    I had to comment on it once more hehe, i was wondering could i send this to my friend, i think she needs to read it