Hey i love your work! yuor now under my favorites. keep on writting!!!!
~shell

I love the way this ended

Great Job! I loved it!

Good job, but u got to understand. there is more to your life than just that girl. although it does seem like u love her. and if u do u should come out and tell her. just a thought. if u get time, read some of my stuff and tell me what u think

Wow, i no how u feel to the very word excaept i still love the darn guy. jeez without knowing that i like him even he admited the guy i like sounds like a jerk and if they ever met he would try and kill him. see even he thinks his a jerk. oh well im no how u feel.

btw u no the comment u made on one of my poems? u sed that to no y u wanna write like me to read ma poem? but then u sed
because its not only bullshi* its has very deep meaning, and
erm did u mean that my poem was bulshit or that i dont no. wt did u actualy mean?
and once again i stand firm that u r a great poet.

Awesome poem i love it and i use to know how u feel but it turned out it was false lol well good job on the poem it is awesome i really loved it good job again:D

keenan