Nicely done I think you should have it layed out better then it will be better understood....but I love the Idea!!:)

Aw i really love this ! it could turn into a song that all people could relate to ! thanks for commenting on mine

Thanks for your comments guys i really appreaciate it i will do the same for you if u want...u can email me at summababii78@yahoo.com or im me at babycret21

~thanks~

~**allison