To Whom It May Concern

by StarGirl   Nov 20, 2005


Voices are making the choices.
Do you have a mind of your own
Or are you alone with a phone
but no one to call?
I could really live without this.
Away from the drama and sink
into a blissful state of mind
without having to think or care.
Worries are yesterday's problem and
Tomorrow's cares are out the door.

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  • 16 years ago

    by TravisInABottle

    I really liked this. There were two lines at the beginning with internal rhyming, but I was disappointed when I found no more. If you start with some internal rhyming, you should finish it out that way. I really love it, and it gives readers a break from the bland rhyming of each line in every poem they read on here.

    The message was really great. I think it really describes how all of us can feel at one point or another, (or at least I know I have felt this way).

    My honest critique: 4/5

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