Really good poem, well written. You are very talented, but just on a personal level, it kinda sounds a little messed up what you did to this girl. I don't know you and I don't know what went on, but just from a girl's point of view, if you really loved her that much you would do more than just write about it. But it was a very good poem!

Wot can i say a good poem AGAIN!!!

Keon this is really nice poem it seems like you really care about this person and im glad that you can express through youself through poetry

Wow, great job that was deep

U got a real talent...i love what u do wit ya words....

This is very sad!
well things do happen sometimes,,, and break a relationship...
keep it up!